literature

The Breaks In Eternity

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sheets calling with numbing lights
pupils dilated by the slick concrete


                                                                                           drifting off
                                                                             years slipped away



now slowly waking to the whispering of the sun
like fingertips along my side

the furnatures been painted black and white
the carpet has moved on
                                                              


               and I am
alone
          standing
in blue
...modernism? lol
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songofthetrees's avatar
lol you need to work on ur spelling hahaha :) but other than thank i love it. esp the end. it def has a timeless feel to it. so could you dissect it for me and tell me what each line symbolizes cause i can get some of them but i really would like to know the story behind each.